"A strikingly handsome and intelligent man uses his talents to make deals happen in favor of his employers. But the seemingly harmless game changes when he meets his peer. A man that turns out to be a very dangerous superior."

What are the stakes? What does she stand to gain if she succeeds in closing the deal? The career boosting promotion she's been wanting? What does she stand to lose if she fails? Her job? Her life?

>>>"forced to make a decision"

Of course, she's forced to make a decision. That's the essence of drama: characters are forced to make decisions that put them in jeopardy. What is the specific jeopardy?

Maybe something like this:

?An intelligent woman uses her talents to make deals happen for a large ruthless corporation. But when she falls in love with a man who also becomes her next target, she is forced her to make a decision that puts a prize on her head"

Handsome and intelligent men make deals every day for the companies they work for. It's s.o.p. And having to deal with stiff competition -- again that's s.o.p. So what's so unusual about this situation? What, specifically, is so special about this business man and what is so special about the danger the competition presents that I,as a viewer, should worry about -- would care to worry about?

And as Richiev, said what are the stakes? What if he fails?