A selfish drunkard is forced to run a startup and fight powerful government agencies after he inherits it from his righteous entrepreneur best friend who died mysteriously.
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When his tech genius best friend dies mysteriously, a Luddite wastrel must complete his invention while fighting off a brigade of spooks intent on capturing it.
You should always think about writing the logline from the perspective of the lead character: for instance.
You write (Revision 1): A righteous entrepreneur dies mysteriously while battling autocratic leader...
From the lead character's point of view: When his best friend is murdered while battling an autocratic leader...
Revision 1 (I am not sure if putting protagonist later is a good idea .. suggestions welcome)
A righteous entrepreneur dies mysteriously while batting autocratic leader politically; his self-centered drunkard best friend now has to run the startup he inherited and avenge his friend’s death.