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• on After a family friend of her dies unexpectedly of cancer, a nanny’s life goes on a downward spiral struggles with alcoholism while raising a young girl whom she adopted.

  Did not understand the purpose of the nanny. Is the young girl daughter of family friend for whom the nanny wants to protect and bring up as a good citizen? Also did not understand the conflict .. does the adopted…

• on After being disgracefully fired for cheating from his billion-dollar startup, penniless maverick joins his ex-girlfriend’s bankrupt company to regain his lost glory

  1. What does the maverick expect from joining a bankrupt company? Does he intend to turn it around? Yes 2. What may prevent him from regaining his lost glory? The other bankrupt company he is joining is anti-thesis to his…

• on After being disgracefully fired for cheating from his billion-dollar startup, penniless maverick joins his ex-girlfriend’s bankrupt company to regain his lost glory

  Thanks

• on After being disgracefully fired for cheating from his billion-dollar startup, penniless maverick joins his ex-girlfriend’s bankrupt company to regain his lost glory

  Thanks will change in V2

• on In the aftermath of a high school shooting, a young popular teacher blames himself for failing to prevent it.

  Interesting premise but I guess we need more information in terms of goal / journey. Then what happens? How does she deal with it? Does she join police/military? Does she try to take revenge ? Before she finally come to…

• on A traumatized ex-military professor must protect his students when he discovers that the dean and his colleagues are spies sent to eliminate him in a dangerous exercise of trust.

  What is "Dangerous exercise of trust"? I like the premise though.

• on A selfish drunkard is forced to run a startup and fight powerful government agencies after he inherits it from his righteous entrepreneur best friend who died mysteriously.

  Revision 1 (I am not sure if putting protagonist later is a good idea .. suggestions welcome)A righteous entrepreneur dies mysteriously while batting autocratic leader politically; his self-centered drunkard best friend now has to run the startup he inherited and…