An amateur actress at a haunted house attraction struggles with her decision to stay at the job she loves while trying to get over a guy who isn’t easy to get over..

Trimmed down, leaner and easier to read - ti's much of an improvement.

Struggles great, but to what end?

Her decision will constitute a single scene in act one, what will be her main action in act two? What is her over arching goal in the A plot?

>>>struggles with her decision to stay at the job

To reiterate, a logline is a brief summary of a plot. ?And plots are not about deciding to decide; plots are about what characters do. ?Specifically, a logline describes the action that follows a decision the protagonist makes by the end of the Act 1.

Example:
In a dystopian future, a girl volunteers to take her sister's place in the annual ?"reaping" of youths by a dictatorship for a gladiatorial fight to the death.
(The Hunger Games)

"The Hunger Games" is not about Katniss "struggling with her decision". ?It's about the struggle after she makes her decision.

okay guys, how about this version?

An amateur actress at a year-round haunted house attraction falls for the resident Lothario and struggles with her decision to stay at the job she loves while trying to get over him.