A reckless guy with a secret smartphone app must go back in time and undo his courtship with his cousin when he accidentally impregnates her.

by NavCR Penpusher · 33 pts 0 views

Hi, logline it community.

Yesterday I dreamed about it, and it left me a little awkward. I know this logline is quite lol, but it sounds like a very interesting story and wanted to share it with you.

I don’t have much of the story, just that the young boy used to be very lonely but mischievous and after meeting his cousin he fell in love with her and proceeded to get her pregnant. Repentant, with the help of a secret application on his phone, he traveled to the past to replace himself by performing the same events in a less provocative way so that she would not feel offended or attracted.

By the way, he can only travel to events that have occurred while he was carrying that phone. And since during that relationship he used to change his phone very often, every time he traveled to the past, he had to find his previous phone to continue traveling further into the past.

Hope you find it interesting too, and help me to find my mistakes, please.

Greetings.

NavCR

4 reviews

BenGilani Logliner · 360 pts

Hi NavCR,
Of course, they certainly are. I suggest you read the loglines of movies in different genres. I did it myself and trust me, it helps.

Good Luck

Ben

NavCR Penpusher · 33 pts

Thank you Ben and Odie. I hope my skills are improving.

Odie Samurai · 2,208 pts

Another angle:
“A techie teen creates a time-traveling smartphone app in order to right wrongs when accidentally impregnating his kissing cousin.”