A professor goes antiquing and finds a golden credenza that melts Nazis so the USA keeps it forever.

by Lowell Penpusher · 146 pts 994 views

Raiders of the Lost Ark

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dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

A swashbuckling American archaeologist must find the Ark of the Covenant before the Nazis do and harness its legendary power.
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RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARK

Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

This logline doesn't have an inciting incident or goal and therefore fails to describe a plot. Further more the MC lacks a character flaw description and as a result there is no implication of an inner journey.

I think best to re draft this logline with the above information included.

Hope this helps.