Lowell

146 points

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on Series Logline: A quirky, man crazy, thirty-something turns her life upside down to find out why she is loveless and unlucky in New York City.

This feels like it needs one more element to put it over. ?How does she turn her life upside down? ? Does she become a cat burglar and breaks into the homes of people she thinks are happy to spy…
on When the daughter of a corrupt Mexican police chef of Iguala is kidnapped, he goes om a murderous rampage while unwillingly helped by a masked female vigilante who brutally revenges the endless killings of Mexican favela girls.

The story here sounds like one that could be?pretty exciting, but the moment I get to "police chef", I wonder if I'm in good hands. ?And this plot has a lot to untangle. ?This police chief is corrupt. ?He's a…