A pathological liar is subpoenaed to testify in a murder trial against his only friend.

by Alan Smithee Penpusher · 20 pts 896 views

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bomarc 0 pts

You got some really good inputs from everybody but your logline sure trigger my imagination. Keep working on it!

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Flaw and gender are definitely clear... "pathological liar" and "HIS only friend" clear those up. i agree about character information. my intended conflict was that he has to tell the truth in this situation, which conflicts himself psychologically (because he is a pathological liar) and his only friendship (against his friend) but that totally didn't come across so i understand the confusion. any suggestions would be appreciated :)

Alan Smithee Penpusher · 20 pts

Flaw and gender are definitely clear... "pathological liar" and "HIS only friend" clear those up. i agree about character information. my intended conflict was that he has to tell the truth in this situation, which conflicts himself psychologically (because he is a pathological liar) and his only friendship (against his friend) but that totally didn't come across so i understand the confusion. any suggestions would be appreciated :)