A mystically unnoticeable "Sea cliff" is the catalyst for the place of change. Story one is about an old lady, in all her alternative new age approach, change and moves on from grieving of her husband's death, before spreading his ashes into the ocean from the sea cliff. Story two is about an OCD, analytical & rigid couple, sick of their lifestyle, breaks their habits as for once they decide to go someplace chaotic(sea cliff), as they become intimate in there, later on, the once considered sterile couple are happy about becoming parents.

This is not a logline- narrow it down to A protagonist who struggles against odds (people/place/thing) in pursuit of his goal. Cut out the rest- a logline has one purpose: to get someone interested enough to want to read your script. A producer JUDGES your writing on your logline (always think BREVITY & SPECIFICS).

Hi! Interesting elements here, but, definitely not a logline. :)

If you look at some similar films - full-length, but the same idea - you'll find things like "Cat's Eye" and "The Red Violin."

The IMDB.com description of each:

"Stephen King's Cat's Eye" - A stray cat is the linking element of three tales of suspense and horror.

"The Red Violin" - A perfect red-colored violin inspires passion, making its way through three centuries over several owners and countries, eventually ending up at an auction where it may find a new owner.

Neither of those is a perfect logline, and these types of films are difficult to create loglines for, but, what both do is identify the thing that links the stories, and give an idea, at least. of the type of film to expect.

Perhaps these could be jumping off points for your logline!

I think I may have misguided that as a synopsis :p sorry about the confusion . Basically, the story is about how these unrelated yet parallel characters in ways they are controling and coping with their lives, I couldn't really figure out how to summarise it into a log since it has multiple stories. United in a location of significance.

It's for a short film so it's not anything long. First story has 1 protagonist and second story has 2 protagonist