A mother to two clone children plans for more clone children, but she must make the world a place where they can survive, so she unleashes her ability to kill using only her brain, founding a world of potent and fertile.

by RheaSolaris Penpusher · 296 pts 1,241 views

10 reviews

Foxtrot25 Summitry · 17,380 pts ★ Accepted

A biologically enhanced mother must fight for the social acceptance of her cloned children before her own brother takes them away from her.

It's just so hard to zero in on what makes this story unique.

bivric Samurai · 626 pts

I don't think you need to give the conclusion of killing the brother in the logline.? I also don't see any reason to mention she has 2 cloned children.? ?I would simply say something like this:

"Impeded by her own brother, a genetically enhanced woman finds she has the power to kill with just her thoughts and unleashes this power to save her children."

RheaSolaris Penpusher · 296 pts

A biologically enhanced mother plans for more clone children, but she must make the world a place where they can survive, so she unleashes her ability to kill using only her brain, kills her brother.