A monster turns on his creator, leaving the creator's son to hunt it down before it can find his sister and make her it's bride.

Devil (2nd pass)

3 reviews

cryters Penpusher · 20 pts

I like Richiev's alternative logline, though it is a couple words over the limit.

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

"When his scientist father is murdered by his own creation, a pacifistic hacker is forced to hunt down the creature when it's discovered the next target is his sister."