A persistent class president investigates the disappearances of multiple female students when she discovers the truth behind an admired teacher who, since the death of his family, has kept the students captive, she manipulates him into a trap that leads her to the missing students.

by S.C.Will Logliner · 361 pts 977 views

7 reviews

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

This tells the story but god is it long. Clear, concise lines are key. Hope this helps.

Karel Segers Mentor · 5,093 pts

This tells the story but god is it long. Clear, concise lines are key. Hope this helps.