A hypochondriac young man delights in getting an internship with America's favorite talk-show neuro-scientist/psychiatrist — until the good doctor goes berserk and the young man becomes his only link back to sanity…

Neuronics

2 reviews

dpg 112,231 pts

What nicholsandrewhalls said. The inciting incident seems to be that the TV shrink goes beserk. Now what must the hypochondriac do?

Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai · 1,742 pts

Drop "young man" - it's superfluous.

"When a (character flaw?) hypochondriac is offered an internship with America's favourite talk-show psychiatrist, he (what action does he take - and what is his goal?)"

The stakes; his mentor's sanity, is relatively clear from your logline above, but the important details of goal and action are missing.