A human orphan raised in outer space must overcome his sense of abandonment to help Elvis Presley protect a time machine from an alien hellbent on destroying the galaxy.

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Hi solidjim,
i like the concept of an Elvis/time machines sci-fi ?but have a few questions on the logline that ight hopefully tease this out a bit more

1. what do abandonment issues have to do with saving the galaxy? why are abandonment issues relevant?
2. why is a human orphan raised in outer space the best protagonist here?
3. or is elvis the protagonist?
4. what's the call to action?

good luck!