A former undercover cop, now under witness protection, awakens – blindfolded, in a truck, destination unknown. He'll now be forced to face his tragic past and seek vengeance upon those who destroyed his life.

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Destination

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Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Thanks for the feedback guys, much appreciated.

How about -An ex-undercover cop, now under witness protection, awakens - blindfolded, in a truck - must escape his captors before the destination and avenge the death of his family.

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

Agreed, don't just say they destroyed his life, tell us how they destroyed his life... in as few words possible :)

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

"Forced to face his tragic past..." isn't exactly blowing my skirt up... not that I wear skirts.

How about this:

"After he's kidnapped from witness protection, a former undercover cop must escape his captors trunk before the destination; his former boss who's sworn vengeance."

Hope that helps, good luck with this!