A drug dependent father finds himself part of an epic battle against a demonic legion and is joined in the fight by a time traveler from the future as he learns the fate of the world lies within the mind of his autistic child.

Dark Dawn

2 reviews

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

great point! I tried reading it out loud the way it is and ran out of breath! LOL Thanks!

GriffUK 0 pts

Sounds like an epic battle indeed, but there seem to be too many elements and as such I can't decide which is the most important. How about missing out the bit about a time traveller, interesting as it is, to focus on the father and son? "A drug dependant father protects his autistic son against a demonic legion as he discovers the fate of the world lies within the boy's mind".