3 reviews
Best if you look at the ideal structure for a logline at the 'Training' tab on the top bar.
A few points to get you started though:
Less is more - 30 words or under are ideal lengths for loglines.
Best to describe a plot as appose to only the emotional stakes for a character, this means an event that starts the story and a goal.
And what woman isn't looking for "Mr. Right"? ?And who doesn't have reservations about commitment? ?Other than she's using the company dating app, I don't see what differentiates this from other romantic comedies about a woman looking for love in all the wrong places, among all the wrong men.
Why now?
What changed? Why is she signing up for a dating service at this point in time?