A contestant on the Bachelor-esque show "Token of Love" hatches a plot to win the secret million dollar prize with the help of the show's cynical host.
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Yeah, why is it a secret?
This idea has a lot of potential for irony, satire, excitement, dark comedy and plenty of belly laughs.
I agree with Adam, I 'd love to get an extra detail about the contestant, something that puts a little more flesh to her probably well shaped, skinny and tanned bone. Doesn't necessarily need to be a sympathetic thing, could be something that enhances the comedic tone of the story.
The only thing that puzzles me is why is it the million dollar prize SECRET?
A lot of potential in this idea. I think it would be more interesting if the host tried to help them win though instead of stealing, which is what it sounds like they are planning.