A computer hacking team has found themselves in a race against time to erase their digital fingerprints after attracting the attention of the secret service.
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I like this logline better than the one at the top.
Ok..let's try this one. Same story, different point of view.
After millions of bank account and pin numbers are stolen, special agent Mason Young must stop the hackers from bankrupting millions of Americans.?
I had it that way at first. It just didn't sound right to me. I'm working on it....
I would change this to present tense. Instead of "has found themselves," I would say, When they, "Find themselves"
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