CoreyLane
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Thanks a bunch! Let me fiddle with it a bit...
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Thanks for the comment and I see where you are coming from with the deadline insert but the logline is rather lengthy as it is. But....let's give it a shot. "After millions of bank account and pin numbers are stolen,…
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Thanks Richiev! I don't think that the story in general would change all that much but the POV has changed completely.
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Thank you.
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Ok..let's try this one. Same story, different point of view. After millions of bank account and pin numbers are stolen, special agent Mason Young must stop the hackers from bankrupting millions of Americans.?
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I had it that way at first. It just didn't sound right to me. I'm working on it....
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Thanks!
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I haven't. I will have to check it out.
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Thanks!
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Thanks! I'll play with it some more. It was a spur of the moment idea.