A brilliant Russian Cadet shortly after his graduation day is being targeted by the CIA, his respond was a personal travel to NYC to change all well-known war tactics with the help of his genius weapons.

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Hi Danny - there's no chance I'm going to read all of that. It's just too much. The point of the logline is to accurately convey the premise of your film, so that you don't need to send someone a huge wall of text.

I asked the questions above because NONE of them are clearly explained in your logline. While not all of them may be necessary to include in the 30 odd words that convey the core idea of your film, at least a few of them need to be covered.

The most glaring issue is why he is going to NY - "to change war tactics" means nothing to the reader, because we don't know how to visualise that. Does it mean he's going to befriend a government official and slowly convince him of a different way of waging war? Or is he programming some powerful computer? Or is he waging guerilla warfare on the population of NY and therefore changing the way war is waged? You can see why we're all having an issue understanding what your movie is about, and how we can help you refine the logline. The protagonist's objective goal and the stakes of failure are unclear.

Some would think that Yuri is an act against the American pride , I understand that , but the truth is America is so powerful and if we have failed to creat a human being who can defeat the American power then what else power he should deal with ?! whatever you think , excuse me my friends Coz my Yuri have to bring the American power down :)

Your welcome , Richiev ,
why to confuse you ?!
the new generations are much more powerful than all nuclear reactors , I need to watch all the American movies to declare that Yuri is the first of his kind , I am proud to creat Yuri and to give him the power to do anything as a free powerful human being who you would meet anywhere on this planet but you never know his real name or his real nationality .

Thanks for the reply... but you confuse me :)

As if we all are groups of crazy creatures just want to push the button with the first problem ?.No
This is between Yuri and George Maxwell including George's superiors .