A brilliant pickup artist addicted to crack meets the love of his life in form of a stripper whom just laid of the pipe and must now choose – Love? Or crack.

Crackhead Casanova

1 review

bondthewriter 2 pts

I'm struggling to tell what kind of story this is... When I read the logline it feels like a straight up drama, but then when you add the title it makes it feel like a comedy. Maybe that's just my perception, but the title makes it sound funny.
It also feels a bit wordy. All the info is good but maybe it can just be reworded to flow a bit better... like..
"After a crack addicted pickup artist falls for a woman at Narcotics Anonymous, the struggle between his addiction and her love take him to the edge of sanity."

So many possibilities with this.. good luck!