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Hard to add anything of much value to this thread, but I will say that a mix of martial arts and monarch drama sounds very interesting.
I look forward to reading future drafts of this.
You need to tie the wisdom and kung fu to the threat and goal.
I think you need to clarify the goal - the king must overcome the evils of the royal family in order to..... what's at stake? or else? ?Also the king doesn't seem to have any flaws, only strengths...