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After years of grieving and loneliness, an ex-luchador who has lost his wife and children in a mysterious accident becomes aware of his still alive children. But he has to fight the most horrible human trafficking ring to save them.
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After years of grieving and loneliness, an ex-luchador who has lost his wife and children in a mysterious accident becomes aware of his still alive children. But he has to fight the most horrible human trafficking ring to save them.
Does this work?
"A retired luchador must elude American border patrols and crack a lethal human trafficking ring to recover his lost daughter."
or, alternately,
"A retired luchador must crack a lethal human trafficking ring and elude American border patrols to recover his lost daughter."
Just depending on which threat is actually seen as more dangerous, and in what order things may happen.
I must say, I really like this one.
thank you Hillary, nice advice.
Maybe even, Retired Luchador
I like how you upped the stakes with the daughter.