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When their conversion to goodness is discovered by Lucifer, a young devil and his converted, ‘goody two shoes’ family flee Hell for the suburban life of Canberra where the boy finds that being a horned, red-skinned devil and ‘fitting in’ to Earthly life is not as easy as he thought.
Hi Cryters. To be honest, I'm really new to this logline stuff, so please don't think that I speak with any authority. One comment I read before said that the protagonist should have their character theme trait and goal in…
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In the claustrophobia of a haunted flat, an immature voodoo sorcerer makes a terrible choice when he calls upon his dark gods to seek revenge for a broken heart.
How about this for a rewrite? "A voodoo sorcerer, whose prone to dangerous tantrums, makes a terrible choice when he calls upon his dark gods to seek revenge for a broken heart. He has to survive his claustrophobic home of…
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In the claustrophobia of a haunted flat, an immature voodoo sorcerer makes a terrible choice when he calls upon his dark gods to seek revenge for a broken heart.
Hi. Thanks a lot for your comments.
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In the claustrophobia of a haunted flat, an immature voodoo sorcerer makes a terrible choice when he calls upon his dark gods to seek revenge for a broken heart.
Hi. Thanks a lot for you comments. To be honest, I'm finding this really hard. Every time I write this, I keep hearing a deep voiced narrator in my head reading it out. Basically, the guy gets his heart broken,…
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When their conversion to goodness is discovered by Lucifer, a young devil and his converted, ‘goody two shoes’ family flee Hell for the suburban life of Canberra where the boy finds that being a horned, red-skinned devil and ‘fitting in’ to Earthly life is not as easy as he thought.
I like the idea of a whole family being forced to leave their culture because of differing ideologies. I can see there being family tension as well because one of the kids may be a traditionalist. From the title though,…
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When their conversion to goodness is discovered by Lucifer, a young devil and his converted, ‘goody two shoes’ family flee Hell for the suburban life of Canberra where the boy finds that being a horned, red-skinned devil and ‘fitting in’ to Earthly life is not as easy as he thought.
You're mistaken about the your point on how people view hell. There have been many different takes on the Christian version of hell, especially as much of the western world is exposed to very diverse cultures nowadays. Look at two…
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On the brink of instantaneous cloning technology a physicist makes a deal with an old friend for the key to his theory in return for a clone of his wife, but when the cloning goes wrong and his wife begins to forget who he is he must find her clone and decide which version deserves to live.
Hi. I wasn't sure whose wife was being cloned either and for what purpose.
