When two friends wake up to a sunless morning, they learn their roommate hasn’t come home from last night. After a failure to contact him or anyone else, they venture outside in an attempt to understand this anomaly.

It feels like there is two different plot lines. Are they related? It's a good start, but I feel it would be clearer if you make the relation more defined.

Feels like you might be telling two separate stories here. Can you combine them into one fluid storyline?

Such a cool premise, but with so much going on it makes this quite a hefty logline.

When two confused friends wake up to a sunless morning, they must venture outside to find their roommate who never came home and figure out this anomaly.

This does remove the making contact part, but I think that's not the most crucial information here and is better left out for the sake of brevity