When intruders break into her home, the ghost of a paraplegic must save her unsuspecting husband from the intruders? sinister plan that involves planting venomous snakes in the husband?s closet.

Ada’s Porch

2 reviews

Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts ★ Accepted

It wold be better if the logline described the intruders as the ones responsible for her death, then much like in Ghost the stakes are frighteningly plausible.

danielplagens Penpusher · 130 pts

While the goal?and stakes are clear, ?I have questions about the setup. How is our ghost going to stop the intruders? Is she a poltergeist? More importantly, why the venomous snakes? I assume these intruders are planning on killing the husband. So why aren't they just trying to kill him outright? Why go through the trouble of the Snakes on a Plane esque tactics?