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This is a pretty well written logline. There's a goal and high steaks. I understand how the story's going to work and the genre.
My only question is about Emma. We don't usually need a name in loglines, so I'd recommend replacing the proper name with a descriptor. What kind of a girl is Emma? Thinking about how an experience like this would change a person may lead you to an interesting character. What is someone going to learn from surviving, or even just being put into, this kind of a situation? Is she a shy girl, the polar opposite of a suave seducer, or a bit of a party animal?
Again, this is super good. Addressing that one note may be all you need to solidify the concept.