When an introverted man sees a woman in red in the building across from him, he must stumble on a foolish quest on a dating app to find her, but she isn’t what she seems.

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Jeremy Palazzolo 29 pts

Hey Marcelo,

Very interesting concept, I think that the logline is a little longwinded and could be refined a little more.

Perhaps "in the building across from him" could be cut unless it is entirely crucial to the plot and the wording for "he must stumble on a foolish quest on a dating app to find her" could be worded better.

Cheers.