Jeremy Palazzolo

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on When an ambitious archeologist finds an ancient crystal engraved with a hidden message, he funds a secret sea creature who unlocks the message so his brain remembers the secrets of the Atlantis civilisation in the crystal, allowing him to release the Talisman Knights; the so called purveyors of ancient antiques; to release their grip on him.

Quite an intriguing premise so far, although the logline feels slightly long-winded and muddled in the second half. "He funds (finds) a secret sea creature who unlocks the message so his brain remembers the secrets of Atlantis…" – This feels…