When a young Dutch woman killed a group of Nazis with the Dutch resistance, they caused an entire town to be sent to a concentration camp, they must save their countrymen anyway they can.

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Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

That's just an unhelpful dick of a thing to say.

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

I'm not sure about all these loglines starting with "When". I don't think it's the shorcut everyone hopes as it reads too formulaic.

I think this is a workable concept. I'd posit it (something like) thus:

"A young Dutchwoman has to save her friends and neighbours when they are sent to a concentration camp in revenge for her Resistance group's success against the Nazis."

Daniel Helis 0 pts

Poor choice of everything, you need to rethink your life

Mark brennan 0 pts

I dont think you need to say Dutch resistance, resistance would be fine. We already know shes dutch.