When a young boy is taken away from his father, and starts to get raped by his mother, he must find a way to escape.

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Nordic12 Penpusher · 28 pts

It reads like an opening line or a teaser not a complete logline. Also delete"When" and start with"A" and delete "starts to get raped" and insert "gets raped" to tighten it up and make the action more immediate