When a woman?s badly burnt body is discovered, an occult writer investigates a strange Christian sect. She must escape the cult and expose their evil.

>>You?re not really joining the dots

Tell me! And I shouldn't have to join dots. The plot should be obvious, something I, or anyone else reading the logline should immediately grasp.

You describe the cult as "Christian" and then describe their practices as designed to appease "gods". Say what? Those two terms are theologically incommensurate. It's like saying kangaroos lay eggs.

You're not really joining the dots here. That maybe my fault in the logline but my description should have helped?

>>I haven?t described her as a reporter.

Doh!

But my general point stands.

>>>the cult may be performing old pagan rituals e.g. Burning a virgin and scattering her ashes in the fields to appease the gods"

"gods" -- then would it be "Christian", which is monotheistic?