When a timid janitor?s fiance is kidnapped by a fire demon, he must locate a mythical artifact and uncover its power before the devil kills his lover and unborn child

Cool. Wow. Enjoy the process man. Especially the blood, sweat and tears ;)

I like this logline, it's direct and powerful. The only thing I'm left wondering if what the link is between the fire demon and the fact that the guy is a janitor. But other than that, nice work! :)

Honestly, it's just a logline at this stage. I'll be writing a beat sheet soon and progress from there. Once I have completed a draft etc I will contact Karel or the Shark-man to help me iron out the kinks. Months away, plenty of time to focus on the story and character arc. Cheers for all the help.