When a student gets stuck in an elevator he must try to escape before the elevator drops to the bottom floor.
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"When a student is stuck in an elevator, he must try to escape before the elevator drops to the bottom floor."
Protagonist - Student
Antagonist - Elevator
Where is the elevator? How many floors?
Also, answer the following questions.
Who?
What?
Where?
When?
How?
Why?
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Nice start, but I'd like to hear something of his emotional journey. What prevents him from getting out, when there's no one to hinder him? Is he one-handed? Claustrophobic? And why is it important that he is a student - is he a theologist who believes that we are all in god's hand and must change his view in order to survive, or an ingenieur who wanted to quit university and now has to think of a technological trick to get out (for saving the others in there :). Plot is one thing, character the other.