When a small-town father is framed for murder and sent to jail, a young lawyer strives to prove his innocence.

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Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

The life changing event and jeopardy are clear. Other elements are missing. Is the hero the lawyer? does he have a stake in the outcome? Does he have a personality flaw, and arc? The villain is missing. I guess he framed the victim to cover his own guilt. Any visual clue would help.

alice wattsmith 0 pts

It's not a very captivating concept, adding a goal to your log line can help with this.

TessWhite 0 pts

There should be a reason for why the lawyer wants to help the father who has been accused, other than it being his job.