2 reviews
Location is key to help orientate the reader.
I like it. The premise sounds promising. I would try to be more specific about how their lives are being threatened and what kind of supernatural forces they're dealing with.
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Location is key to help orientate the reader.
I like it. The premise sounds promising. I would try to be more specific about how their lives are being threatened and what kind of supernatural forces they're dealing with.