When a famous Italian detective investigates the death of the daughter he didn\'t know he had, he uncovers more than just murder in this small, immigrant, upstate New York town.

This is very straight forward and easy to visualise as a film. I would also take out immigrant or be more specific. What culture are they from? This way we can see them. Good luck with it. PF

I like this. My gut originally was telling me it's too wordy after first read, but the core of the story is strong without little detail - just the way it should be.
-Joey

Thank you. Yes, the culture is important.