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You've posted it under 'Horror' but the way you have pitched It, doesn't seem like a very active-action. At the most I hope him to get better soon but I'm not with him on this journey.
It would be helpful if you elaborated on both the 'hypnotic regressions' & his 'mysterious and debilitating condition'
What does his condition make him do? And as a result of this 'regression' what becomes his objective goal? Try making it more visual.
hope this helps :)