Un fotógrafo, adicto a las carreras de galgos, se arruina. Su familia lo abandona, y él decide convertirse en mendigo en compañía de un galgo, aunque en realidad es una vieja bicicleta. Tendrá que expiar, sus errores del pasado.

7 reviews

oscuro escriba Penpusher · 23 pts

Al leer el logline original, no entendí bien la historia (claro , el traductor hizo de las suyas) sin embargo, creo que el logline debe ser lo más funcional posible, y a veces hay que quitarle esos detalles que tanto nos gustan , para que la esencia salga a la luz. Me parece una buena historia, la del viejo apostador y su bicicleta. faltaría el nudo o conflicto, y una posible resolución. saludos desde la patagonia.

Daniel Galindo Penpusher · 20 pts

Thank you very much for your help, it is true that the story is confusing since it is difficult for me to concentrate the whole story in a logline. the story is inspired by a real character, a homeless man who always walked through a city with an old bicycle. Investigating his life discover that in the past he was a photographer by profession and addicted to gambling greyhound racing which led to his ruin and abandonment by his family. This led to serious mental problems and his last days were spent in a psychiatric hospital. He did not want to receive help from anyone since living in poverty was his way of paying for his mistakes, a revenge against himself. I imagined this character seeing himself in the reflections of the shop windows with a greyhound, although it was actually an old bicycle that he found in the trash. his sin bells everywhere. This is a bit of history. The truth is that it is very difficult to be able to concentrate everything in a few lines. Thanks for your time.