Three generations of superheroes attempt to make peace with one another against the backdrop of history.

Sharkeatingman is (judge) Geno Scala...

"Basically the premise is that a Law and order type hero..." Well, one thing is obvious- NONE of us were even CLOSE to knowing what the premise was based on your original logline. That's a big red flag.

I think the concept is very original- even superheroes should grow old, have families, offsping, and eventually become grandfathers. That's a terrific hook, in my eyes. The problem, as I see it, is making it a straight drama. Not only are dramas the lowest-selling spec genres out there, it just doesn't seem to fit with the concept, which screams hilarity and very comical situations. Can a concept where a potential son-in-law is introduced to his gf family, whose father is a CIA spy, be dramatic, with shoot-outs and car chases? Sure, but it destroys the potential comical outcome of such a situation and "Meet The Fockers" would never have realized its full potential. Now take a premise like a scientist getting bitten by a radioactive spider, then begins to turn into a spider- is there much in the way of humor in that set-up? It's a stretch to say the least.

I like the concept, but I'd reconsideer the genre. It strikes me as an obvious generational tale on the lines of "The INcredibles", and that's a pretty good movie to be compared to.

How does he find it? Is he looking for it? If he is, why? What is the back story to him finding it? I mean you need to ask all these questions for all three people in order to figure out who your hero is, because at the moment you don't have one. Who has the biggest wound and needs an arc for redemption. And then you need to create the action that will bring them together on this journey. Hope this makes sense.