No offense intended, but this is a clinic on how NOT to write a logline. 1. It's too long. 2. It's misspelled ("lose" hope, not "loose" hope). 3. It doesn't make sense (who are the people who don't remember? What does it mean to lose hope "by" them?). 4. There's nothing that makes this logline stand out, and in fact, it seems exactly like the movie "Transpotting." I'd suggest you find the one thing about your story that makes it different from any others in the genre and focus on that in the logline. Make it clear and concise, and have someone with a strong command of English check it for spelling and comprehensiveness. Good luck.