The unforgettable true journey of Alice Paul from Quaker childhood to leader of the battle for women?s equality under the constitution, from Suffrage to the Equal Rights Amendment.

Thank you, paperback. These are good suggestions.

Hi KellieMcK,

This seems pretty clear to me, I think you could condense it further.

From:

"...to leader of the battle for women's equality under the constitution,"

To:

"...to embattled leader for women's constitutional equality"

Which got me thinking you could give a little more about the Quaker childhood:

"from peaceful Quaker childhood"

"Peaceful" or appropriate adjective that gives insight into the nature of her origins and her personality as a child.