The Examiner, is a thriller about an emotionally stressed widower and single parent bank examiner, who investigating a multi-billion dollar financial fraud,discover that all clues lead to himself and must find the imposter before a determined anti-fraud unit officer catches up with him.This becomes increasingly difficult because the imposter- happens to be the way ward son he is struggling to control , being forced by an ex-convict bank manager on a revenge course..

by hihello8484 Logliner · 445 pts 828 views

The Examiner

3 reviews

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts ★ Accepted

When a bank examiner realizes the evidence in the multi-billion dollar fraud case he is investigating?leads to him, he must find the imposter before he is arrested.
(24 words)

There's no need to ID the antagonist in the logline or his motivation; ?loglines should not contain spoilers. ?That's the mystery the protagonist has to solve. ??(And probably the more accurate genre description is mystery rather than thriller, ?albeit it's not in the list.)

hihello8484 Logliner · 445 pts

Thank you my brothers and mentors.

Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

Agreed with DPG.

Look at the Training tab on the top bar of this website, it may help you understand the preferred structure? for a logline.

A significant and out of the ordinary event motivates a flawed character to take action in order to achieve a compelling goal.

Fundamentally, you only need to describe a motivating event and an inciting incident - in your case him being framed, and a goal - in your case catching the culprit.? Best to keep the logline under 30 words, and be sure to be clear about who does what.