revised one the director shoots his video in the studio, due to a blackout he becomes frustrated, calls the electric company and talks to a computer that keeps repeating questions.

If there's a blackout how is the computer still on?
(Nir is right, the formula tab is life altering)

There's no real story described in this logline, I suggest you study other posts on this site and read through the 'Formula' tab before writing the next version.