Pressured into attending a frat party, an introverted college student must face-off with an aggressive frat boy to save herself from becoming a rape victim.

6 reviews

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

>>Also, in order to avoid making it look like I?m trying to capitalize on national headlines, I can nix the word ?rape.?

You're needlessly handicapping yourself. ?I don't believe that there would be penalty points for capitalizing on a current event. ?It's SOP in the biz. ?It's a tried-and-true, time-honored way of promoting a script. (And you wrote the script well before the Stanford scandal, right?)

So name the threat. ?Don't leave it up to a logline reader to guess.

Castler Media Samurai · 589 pts

Before coming to this site, this was my logline for this short:

A brainy college Sophomore, attending her first Frat party, must follow her instincts in order to save herself from a dangerous predator.

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Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

I still don't see what is unique about this story that mass it more interesting than the many other rape stories in the news or in novels.
Perhaps if the sexes were reversed (there are cases of male rape victims) or if the attacker is a woman as well it would stand out, and give the story a hook.