On the outskirts of a small town, a bewildered woman is pushed to the breaking point when she escapes her overbearing husband by luring him into the woods. Short Story, 6pg.

I don't think you need, "Pushed to the breaking point" if you have set it up correct we will know that without you telling us.

Even though it is a short I would still add a goal for the woman now that she is in the woods. (Unless the story is about her getting to the woods)