Logline- A racially prejudiced cricket fan about to lose the family hotel because it has been declared aboriginal land, and he lacks funds for back rent , goes back to 1938 with his prospective Indian son in law where he finds a solution, a 1930 penny and learns his true heritage is aboriginal, but he has only 24 hours to overcome overcome mistrust and mistaken identity in a war weary Australia and he must work with his son in law if he is to survive an aboriginal curse, and and get back to his own time .

by hospas Penpusher · 128 pts 2,291 views

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Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

There is a lot going on in this story. Time travel, A curse, Prejudice, A fight to save his hotel, war, and apparently cricket. It's so jumbled I can't see ultimately what's at the heart of the story. Is the heart of the story saving his hotel? Is the heart of the story overcoming his prejudices? Is the heart of the story getting back to his own time period? At it's heart, what is this story about?