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A freshman in high school contemplates suicide after intense bullying for being gay but changes his mind after realizing that life is better now than 50 years ago
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How is it the student just realized something that happened 50 years ago?? Who helped the student realize his mistake?
It sounds like it's going to be one of those films with tons of close up slowmo on his face as he contemplates. What you're describing all takes place in his head. Is that what you're going for? If not, think of how you could make this visual (film) instead of interior (novel).
If he's being intensely bullied now... how is that different to what happened 50 years ago? What specifically about life now makes him change his mind?