In a world run by machines, a timid young woman – holding a vital secret – must regain her ability to speak before everything she loves is destroyed.

I think this has great potential. What kind of machines? Is it only machines in the story? or do humans still have control? What is the secret she holds?

I went ahead and resubmitted the revision. Find it here:
https://loglines.org/when-a-young-woman-foresees-her-communitys-catastrophic-doom-during-an-accident-that-renders-her-without-speech-she-must-choose-between-keeping-a-solemn-promise-and-telling-the-life-saving/

I went ahead and resubmitted the revision. Find it here:
https://staging.loglineit.com/when-a-young-woman-foresees-her-communitys-catastrophic-doom-during-an-accident-that-renders-her-without-speech-she-must-choose-between-keeping-a-solemn-promise-and-telling-the-life-saving/